That I'm totally adverse to toeing the line between 'PG-13' and 'R' in this comic.
I'm half expecting mixed feelings on this one, but hopefully the overall response is positive. If not...Sorry? I don't know.
It's out and I'm not taking it back. Haha.
I must have played with the punch line on this one half a dozen times. Originally I had included a Fenz bartender, who was serving the group, but I decided that his sudden appearance would throw you all for a loop. If I had gone with the original idea I would have had Mac and the Fenz both look at each other and exclaim 'For totally different reasons!' removing Doc and Jak's responses totally.
The second notable punch was how this one was originally meant to play out; Eugene asks his question and after a moment of silence where they all stare at each other Jak, Doc and Mac all exclaim 'For Totally different reasons!'.
However I decided that this ending was much more giggle worthy. I particularly like the Doctor's expression in the last panel...he's so freaked people might think he's a felon like Jak.
I really had fun with this one; Eugene and his crew are so much fun to write for. I'm willing to bet they'll show up again sometime, maybe the opening of Chapter Four, I have something big planned there, heh.
Anyhow, enjoy. Monday's the end of this arc then a oneshot, some filler to round out the week and Chapter 3 starts on next Monday!!
-Peace
P.S. I'm not sure of Jak's familiarity of Fenz biology; all I know is that he gets this far-away look in his eye when you ask him about prision. It is not a good look.
Thursday, September 4, 2008
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